Hey there! You need to keep the basic shape of things in mind. For one, think about the shape of the head, whether you see it as the Loomis head or as a box in perspective. On the other hand, if we're viewing the head from a high angle, we should also see the neck from that same perspective, treating it as a more rounded cylinder. The fact that you drew the lower part of the neck as a straight line makes the perspective feel broken. The same applies to the hair. Think of it as a simple organic shape and how it wraps around the head (look at the image in the bottom right). This helps you avoid having different perspectives within a single drawing. If we're viewing something from a high angle, all the objects should follow that same perspective. Hope this helps!