Hi! I adore the pose! Since they have a heigh difference and their bodies are facing different directions I tried to shift their legs to make it look more comfortable. For the face you did a good job! I just think your missing the chin and alignment of the ear. Since they are facing downwards, the ear would shift up, as well as making the skull more visible. I also brought the eye in a little more to make room for the side of the face. Hope this helps!