Hi! It looks off because you treat the face as a flat plane. Skull is a modified sphere - features should wrap around it (see A) and have volume. We should see more of the top of the head (and thus hair) in such perspective (see pink). Same for the nose - we shouldn't see bottom part of it (see B, green) but just the top plane. The character also looks at the floor instead of that black blob. I moved things around accordingly so they look at it now. Earrings are ignoring gravity - they should be pulled down towards the floor. Cheers!