I think you just need another look at the upper torso anatomy. You have the general idea. Your forms are just a bit off. Like you have all of the relevant pieces there, but you have to consider how the body moves in 3 dimensions. For the right side shoulder, it looks like you melded the bicep into the deltoids (shoulder muscles). If the effect that you are going for is to have the forearm in front of the upper arm and shoulder, then think about it in layers that go one in front of the other. Focus on creating the full structure of the upper torso (structure=form not detail) and then pose the arms according to its position. Again you have the general idea down. You just need a bit more work on the underlying construction of the figure. That will boost the readability of the image a lot!! Great work! | Artwod Feedback