Hi! Hands are really hard to draw. Each of the points you struggle with is an own topic. I would suggest looking up tutorials for them - it is impossible to cover it all in a small feedback box. For now: - hand is a sort of rectangular box (imagine slice of bread) with fingers attached to it. Longest finger is about the same length as the palm. Fingers can be broken down in 3 cylinders, bottom one being 50% of entire finger length. For this specific drawing you could get away with just drawing top of the hand and indicate part of the fingers (see A). - for clothing always consider tension point (where fabric is pulled) and gravity - for rendering you would need to invest time into learning values, rendering technies (edge control, blending) and materials. I would start with practicing shading simple forms like a box (see C). Everything can be broken down to simple forms, so if you can render those, you can render anything. Note: I wasn't sure whether her dress was loose and whether she was tugging on the fabric, but I assumed she does. Cheers!