The whole work looks pretty cool, i like the idea and the pose! My honest opinion is that the body seems too short in that art, even for such perspective, half of it is missing T-T. Perhaps some fixin in face proportions too, mouth and nose feels a little too high!
Thank you very much for the feedback and the paintover!
I want to make a simple drawing for Halloween of one of my characters wearing a witch costume, with an over-the-top huge witch hat, but I haven't drawn in a while and I'm pretty rusty. The gesture is done from reference but I tried to exaggerate it and not sure if I messed up the proportions in the process. The angle on the hand is exaggerated too, but I'm not sure if it's working. This is the first "constructed" sketch and I want to know if it's worth continuing. Any other feedback for things I got wrong is welcome, too!
