Your drawing looks really great. Lot of great drawing, great drapery, great design. I love your subtle line weight variation. Here’s some of my thoughts. Take them with a grain of salt, cause you may know better than me. (My version messes up several things as I just used the liquefy tool.) Your character feels pretty short. It feels kind of like we’re missing some anatomy around the stomach or pelvis. If you draw the body under the clothing, it feels like we’re missing some of that area or that the legs are really short. If you’re trying to make them short intentionally (or they’re some other species like a halfling or something), I would push that more. When the average adult is kind of short, it will change some of the other proportions, as the arms and such stay similarly thick, so they look thicker in comparison with their height. A lot of art styles tend to elongate people to be a bit taller than is actually average. If you like your current proportions more, just be sure to really own them. If you feel like your drawing is stiff, it might help to think about the gesture more. I felt a kind of big sweeping gesture going through your character (like the cloth is kind of doing), and tried to push the pose and balance to go with it a bit more. When designing your character, think about elements in your art that can emphasize the main gesture—or counterbalance it. And when creating a pose, try to exaggerate it some beyond what’s realistic. We tend to copy poses literally or even downplay the extreme angles and motion in them. Even in a realistic style, pushing the gesture of your pose a bit beyond reality can help it feel more fluid and interesting. With the bangles, you could make them a bit more cylindrical so they look less donuty. Or you could add some variations between them or add some details. With references, you can look up references of similar things and understand them and apply that to your imaginative work. Or you can make 3D models of props and such to help you see them in 3D. Anyway, these are just minor nitpicks cause your art and character are looking really good. | Artwod Feedback