Hi there! First of all, even though you're drawing the pose using the "skeleton," it doesn't follow proper perspective because of the position and angle of the shoulders and hips. They should tilt in opposite directions. In other words, if the shoulders are tilted to the right, the hips should tilt in the opposite direction, to the left. This will help you maintain a more natural pose and achieve better gesture. :) However, in my opinion, this movement shouldn't be too exaggerated for a male character. Try to think in terms of simple shapes when constructing the body, and avoid using complex forms. Start by drawing the gestures of the torso, either using the bean or slightly boxier shapes. Then, establish the three-dimensional forms and gradually start adding volume. But start by drawing simple mannequins and gradually add more complexity. Understanding the body through simple shapes is key to drawing the human figure. :) Hope this helps!