Hi there! I really like your submission, I think you've established the main masses very well! now you just need to clean the lineart (you can do an over digitally like i did) for me it's very hard choosing which lines to use, I usually start with a clean outline to make sure the silhouette is correct. Then use thinner/lighter line for internal details Then break the silhouette, adding little hairs and things I don't know what is your reference, so I tried to draw from imagination, but you can use the same approach if you are drawing someone's portrait | Artwod Feedback