Hi, I absolutely adore you line work, it is good direction. Here is how I would restructure your portrait to add more anatomical features corectness: ( please note that I exagerate some features towards realism) Lips are lying on a separate muscle cylinder plane, its volume will put them less flat and more wrapped. Chin is a bone and should be pronounced Further eye should hide more behind eye, and it's eye brow will be more pronounced, also try to indicate brows for youe characters. While drawing eyes draw eyeduct corner Nose in this perspective will have diffrent form, it is visible more from the top, not from the side . To avoid flatt feeling, try not to use so heavy line to draw countour of her face, it moves contrast and focal point awy from her lips. Hope that those notes will give you some ideas, keep up the good work! | Artwod Feedback