I tried my best, the angle of the head put the whole face further left, you had drawn yours almost face on. the easiest way to check this is to move the centre line further around the face, you cut the front in half with the centre line but it might be 3/4 or 2/3 behind the nose. I would watch some videos on "drawing faces at any angle" they break it down to simple plains to show you where to place the features on any angle. keep going and have fun, I'm still learning and its great
Thank you very much for the feedback!

