@jademonkey

“Hi! First things first: Great painting so far! Two things you could improve in my opinion: I’m missing a “main attraction”, like a person wandering in the orange area. The eye is lead nowhere. Also ”

“I’m quite a fan of your picture and its composition. At first I also couldn’t figure out what might improve it, but I think it’s the lighting / main focus of it. I reduced the overall brightness of t”

“Hi Nate! That’s quite an impressive drawing! It took me a while to figure out how you could improve it. I think that the drawing lacks a bit of eye guidance. It’s beautiful everywhere! So I tried to ”

“I think you nailed the style quite well. Regarding the lighting: I couldn’t figure out where the light is coming from, and also why he has his tail in front of him. My recommendation for both issues ”

“Hi! First of all: Fantastic work, I love it! I really like the character design and pose. I can’t say much about the rendering, it’s miles better than mine. I have done same tweaks with the right chee”

“Hi! The rendering looks awesome! I’m by no means an expert, but I try to give some meaningful advice. 3 things I would do differently: I would try not to have a white background, any color supporting ”