@ol66747

“The actual rounding itself is fine but the perspective is wrong in terms of vanishing points. I think it’s because you some of the lines are pointing too the wrong vanishing point, the lines twt point”

“It’s too 2d, sorry but I can’t draw over it cuz I’m on my phone and you very much don’t wanna de my finger drawings but you shouldn’t be worried about muscles or anything worry about drawing the body ”

“Firstly it’s a great drawing, now I see the light source is coming from below but on the nose you’ve put light on a plane of the nose which points upwards . I’d say do some studies of the Asaro head t”