@demian35697

“its kind of hard to draw over on my phone, but mainly i would advice readjusting the pose to have a clearer sillouethe and using the direction the eyes of the characters are looking at to match what t”

“I advice deciding where the light comes from, findinga reference and following it, copying which planes of the face are the ones that are liut and the one that are not,. also have more contrast betwe”

“cover eyes with eyelids, find planes of the face that hide, show, shrink and expand depending on perspective. exagerate emotion, clean sillouthere. those are the main things i did here. i advice you d”

“hii i think you should lool more into foreshortening techniques like the circling i made sorry if its not very clear. and also follow the action lines a little more. and make a minimum amount of lines”