@evilution

“Not familiar with the art style you're referring to, but the hair could use a small touch up. The blue hair on the left in particular looks like a single brush stroke which could be improved by trying”

“I could be wrong about this, my firs thoughts are that the big shapes are fighting for attention. The top portion draws the eyes in immediately with the red circular shape that stands out along with t”

“Your standing characters slouch comfortably, maybe try focusing on how shoulders sink into the torso and likewise how the torso sinks into the hips, I think this would really help your subjects which ”