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“It's a very good artwork but what I would say is to make it better, try to make the hips a bit smaller so the legs look attached to the hips”

“I had to draw over it to help but all you really need to improve is lighting! Yours is very good”

“I love the colouring you've done a good job! I've put a bit more if the Chinese style rendering on it for you. All I will say is put a bit more lighting then your all good!”

“I would say to make it more expressive is to had shine in the eyes and if they are happy raise the eyebrows s bit with a little crease. And for a bit more design I just put an ahoge because they are o”