@steph57876

“Hello! I get why you're saying the pose isn't that good, yet it could really be the way the face is facing. The neck gets strained that way so try to make it more to the side (as I showed in my quick ”

“I added my image here as it glitched lol.”

“I just made a quick sketch, but the eyes and nose are too high up. That could be the reason why it looks so odd, I made sure to add where to put the eyes and nose (to the best of my ability on a phone”

“As you can see, I added the face that you could branch off of.”

“This is awesome!! To get the faces lined up I would draw one head then separate them, instead of making 2 separated halves. And I think you should just test out a bunch of colors on a different page o”

“This is just a quick sketch but I think it could help to show where to shade and make some depth.”

“Hello! This is looking really good, not going to lie. I think you could shade a bit to add some depth which I'll try to circle on a markup. Keep it up!”

“Hey dude! This is looking pretty good. One thing I want to add is you should shade a bit. Especially in the dark parts. Keep up the good work!!!”

“Nice work, dude. I would to shade more, in my picture I'll circle the spots you could shade. This is really cool, keep up the good work!”

“This looks awesome, dude! I think Goku on the left looks great, but the one on the right could use some of the classic circle face tactic, while you could shade a little less. Keep up the good work!!”

“I am not that good at drawing, but Gojo's eyes are looking different ways and the King of Curses' face is a little too long, this is still awesome, dude!”