Hi there, I really love the Idea. My version is a little different from ur drawing but I hope you get the idea. First I think for ur lines you have to be certain. you can use sketchy line for the beginning phase but for final version you have to be certain what is the exact structure. draw ur line with confidence. and use reference! also ur nose perspective is from low angle but ur face is front view . and for hair decide what is the exact shape of hair. no random line. At the end I love ur drawing keep it up! | Artwod Feedback