Forsaken? I think something that might be nice to add is having more of a blocky kinda proportions so its a bit less squished. (looks great tho :3) I usually see roblox kinda art looking a bit like the lil red figure I drew. I would also define the wings im pretty sure. And if you have layers to use color on the bottom one under the outline to start off with. And to try to seperate the color from the lines so it looks a bit more clear. I would also love to see more color! It looks great <3