The re draw was mostly just for me to get a feel of the anatomy. I think here proportions are a bit off. Her back needs to stick out more for sure. But ultimately I think the weight /fat is distributed unevenly. Like I think her arms are to this for how thick the rest of her is. I think alsoherhead could be bigger an torso longer.idk this could be a personal preference thing. But ultimately it feels like the proportions and weight are off. Like all her body part belong to different people. On the plus side, I love the face! Very cool style and expression