This looks like a successful drawing. I really like the greasy spot left by the missing pastry. Adds a great narrative touch. The top-down composition works as a graphic arrangement. You could push the shadows, but choosing not to is just as valid. Emphasizing the 2d arrangement works too. If I had to make one critique for a second drawing, it would be to try and vary the size of the objects in some way. Or have two overlap to make one larger shape. Everything is pretty similar in proportion. But you still have a strong focal point with the half eaten one. Nice page.