Strong foundation overall! The main area to tweak is the proportional accuracy: -Structure: The eye is an oval broken into four elements: the main eye, iris, upper/lower eyelids, and lower skin edge (yellow). Remember that eyelids hug the eyeball itself, hugging the globe rather than sitting over the bone. -Proportions: The iris should strictly occupy between 1/3 and 1/2 of the overall eye width. -Anatomy Details: The yellow-highlighted lower edge (waterline) shows skin thickness and carries no eyelashes. For the inner corner (lacrimal caruncle), soften the angle, it follows the eye in a smooth, gentle curve. -Lashes & Brows: Eyebrows sweep outward toward the temples; just lower the arc slightly. For lashes, cluster them into base shapes (in green) and draw simple triangular points on top, including the bottom lashes! -Highlights & Finishing: Ease up on the bright highlights so they don't overpower the rendering. Implying detail usually reads better than trying to render every individual hair or fold. | Artwod Feedback