Add a clearer light source, push your highlight and shadow. Use sharper edges for some light and shadow,if you wanna keep the soft effect, you can use a soft brush and colour dodge paint the light and glow.
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It’s not very professional but I’d say to add a light source! It looks like your character is under a shadow and maybe adding lightning would help define it more
Aoi mukou
Artist's notes:
To be honest, the light and the colours look off, and my line art looks messy as I drew a fanart of aoi mukou from "you and me and her" my rendering is lwk good but I wouldn't call that a render, can someone fix it?
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