The biggest issue I see is that the proportions are off. One of the things that make things look flat is when we don't make clear overlapping shapes. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
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Whalefall
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I created a drawing using the film "Whalefall" as a reference. However, I still feel like my drawing is too flat; I’m not sure how to make it look more like a realistic, beautiful scene while still keeping it artistic.
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