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“This is sick!”
“Love what you're doing with this series! Giving me Blacksad vibes!”
“Love it!”
“What a cool piece!”
“Man these are all great!”
“such a cool card!”
“Hey Daria, Looking good so far! The main issue with your wings is that they're not following anatomical functionality. Wings function just like arms, where the fingers (phalanges) fan out to f”
“And never forget to simplificatie first ;)”
“This is actually amazing progress. Awesome job!”
“Man I absolutely love this progress!”
“This is so cool!! 🤩”
“I really like the combinations of color, it easy on the eyes and the yellow accent color is just enough 👌 The only thing I feel is competing for attention is the texture in the background. I would”
“Great job. To get a bit more of the riot/blizz style, just add more indication of volume trhough the lines or planes of the head. IF you want to make it feel less anime, make the eye a tad smal”
“This is so cool!!!”
“You really had the right idea for mood and composition. Hopefully this paintover help you with future direction for similar scenes. 1. Pick the right composition for the story 2. Make the light an”
“Alright, ogre time! Main issues I’m seeing here is the lack of clear volumes in the form. Therefor everything falls a bit flat and it becomes hard to believe the pose. Also, act out your poses! This”
“Great job with the design so far. Main points: Pay attention to the insertion points of your anatomy. Don’t just use lines for the sake of lines, make them follow the form. When designing a charact”
“Make sure to watch the initial head proportions. You appeared to have forgotten that hair adds volume to the cranium. Which threw off most of the proportions. Adding volume to the hair, keepin”
“Hey Great Job!”
“given the scale of the mouths compared to the cylinder, you can get away with pretty much the same mouth in every angle in this way. I'd suggest to draw much bigger mouths so they have to follow th”
“What will make this more "believable" would be to add some curve to the cylindrical shape of the abdomen so that it doesnt look like a rigid cylinder. Also the obliques shouldn't feel like they're ”
“Overall you're not doing much wrong, but simply choosing some unfortunate lines in the perspective grid. Also the ceiling would probably not be this low unless it is slanted? The rotated radiato”
“Awesome color composition!”
“Needs more structure!”
