Hello there, I had a try at this, I tried not to render the thing that much since you asked for drawing issues, but I think you might benefit a lot if you make the values better too, just so you know and can later work on that too. Main thing happening is that the head was too big on the forehead and too small on the jaw, also ear too big and the hat didnt look like it was resting on the head, it just looked like it was a shape behind, you want to make sure the overlaps are working. It isn't much, but I hope this helps, keep going buddy. | Artwod Feedback