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“Think about the underlying form. Rendering is about describing light and shadow. If you do not know the underlying form you can cannot render. Even folds have form. Try ro break down a reference ”

“Here are some proportions you can study. And how to give you jawline and eyes some structure.”

“Here with a bit more refinement and freckels.”

“Focus on structure. It will be much easier to add details on top of. Here is an example.”

“I think you have a very cool drawing made. I wouldn’t change anything if you were to painting it. But you could refine the hands and shoes if you wanted to have just the lineart. I had fun addin”

“Focus on structure (construction of mannequins). Understanding shading and clothing comes as a consequence of understanding form and their construction. You need more practice with the fundamen”

“The structure is on the right. Try also creating the structure on the left with a posed mannequin as an under drawing. Be mindful of the camera placement (eye level). If the camera is pointing a th”

“I guess it technically could be possible to see it in a reference that her head overlaps his cheekbone and his nose overlaps her head/hair. Visually it reads better to have his entire head in fron”

“You’ll find it easier to add details when you have a clear structural under drawing.”

“Focus on getting a clear and solid construction and use reference.”