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“You did a great job ! Your Perspective is quite nice ! Now it is about some details that could improve the overall believability. First you can think a bit more about the thickness of elements. For ”

“Hello! It's a good practice to take a character and draw it in a different pose ! Good idea ! I would just recommand to start simple. A simple gesture first. Then simple 3D forms and then details. Kee”

“Hello! Good job working on your head! I can see that you are working in a good direction ! Be careful with your proportion though. the front view is quite long. Don't forget to consider the eye as a ”

“Hello! You've done a great work! Honestly your 3D form is already pretty good. Now it is more about little details. Having a cleaner line quality would help you be more precise. Some overlaps needs ”

“Congrats for your good work ! I think it is great that you noticed your issue with convergence! From my experience, being aware of an issue and acting on correcting it while drawing will naturaly ma”

“Congrats for taking the time to make a new version, it looks already way better ! Maybe the flowers are going a bit against your story because it's a dark moment and your flowers are cute. Also the fl”

“First of all great job! I like how your image has an epic story ! Maybe a few stuff that could improve the image are: -Being less regular with the grass in the foreground. -Showing where the ”