@andrew43716127

“i think start with an out line of the mountians think big shapes small and med. this will help keep it interesting. also use reference it will add alot to it”

“solid piece! Cool pose and character. always try to go light against dark he almost disapears into the background the tones are similar maybe a more saturated red could make him pop more. For the shad”

“Cool piece Great chataer maybe push the pose play with your edges a hard line edge vs a blured edge put flowing strands in the hair add some story go with abstract symbols put them in perspective mayb”

“you are getting close. Good job on gathering reference and breaking away from the reference with the design work. not sure if this helps. keep going.”

“your perspective is pretty good. Nice that you see the top edge of the bench. on the legs you can measure the width of one leg and compare it to the other.hope this helps keep going :)”

“i think if you lean the charcter forward the balance will be good. Great drawing!”

“Amazing work on the face and expression maybe if you turn the back a bit so it is more relaxed not sure if you want to put in hands?”

“you almost have a complete turn around front 3/4 side line them up and you have a model sheet for comics or animation. Great character”

“maybe squishing the couch some interaction push and pull on the cusions not sure if this helps hope so cool perspective!”

“Great characters a couple of sugestions.”

“Fosco gave you great notes on the shading just wanted to add a bit about volume and wieght. Keep going cool piece love futuristic wateland robot legs”

“you might like Scott Robertsons work he draws alot of cars adding a shadow adds a lot of depth hope this helps. Cool car!”

“Awesome catch hands tend to take the shape of what they are holding hope the draw over helps”

“everything looks like it is linning up perspective wise some times it helps to draw a box around characters”

“These look solid maybe add floor grids and triangle wedge shapes for the feet will ground the charcters keep going great work!”

“looks pretty solid trust your instints good work keep going!”

“i think pushing expressions or charaturing them as well as features will push you far enough away from the reference hope this helps”

“i think if you locate your light first it will help lots eg is the light low or high is the light in front or behind and if you light up characters that way with big basic forms it will help. Hope thi”

“i think you have a good formula going on a couple of notes. usually mouth corners are in the middle of the eye”

“Super cool character maybe add some drama with an upshot. tilts push the expression maybe a shocked mouth. Great work!!”

“Great design you know it is a good design when you want to pose the character! I added some notes hope this helps :)”

“Very cool idea! Fun story telling maybe seperate the house from the figure at first i thought she was carrying a giant hammer. maybe adjust the tone on the characters comand u gives you a hue saturati”

“Cool drawing lots of life! I put some notes into a draw over. hope they help great drawing!”

“fun character i drew up some notes like how you are putting in twists and turns in your character not just a straight on front view adds alot of personality.”