@vincent50585862

“so first of all i really like the character, especially the jurrassic park shirt haha, and i really like the texture of the shark, however i think the rough texture you used is working against your id”

“I would suggest to to get a better understanding of the underlying form of what you want to draw, in this case maybe consider going through the portrait roadmap on artwod to get a better understanding”

“first of all i really like the hair, and the clothing as well as the overall design and pose idea. However i think there are some structural problems here. your neck is way too long and the forearm ”

“I really like the design, the hair, the clothing ... but if i had to point something out, you should work on the hands and i thi8nk (maybe its just me) the behind leg should be placed a little to the ”

“i can not give you a very professional feedback since i am just starting out on faces rn, but iw ill point out what i think might be some problems. 1.your eyes look very 2dimensional, not like the sp”