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“Really great work! I did a quick structural paintover! The arms felt a bit unproportionally long and were both fighting for attention in the composition, so I moved the other arm back, making the s”

“Great work! I'm not sure what kind of light you are going for. So I did a quick paintover and darkened everything, putting a very simple lighting scheme on the face. But then really playing into th”

“Super great work! I tweaked the face structure slightly, I believe I hopefully found the correct reference image that's been used in your original piece. Making it slightly easier to discern what fee”

“I did a quick paintover! What I mainly wanted to touch upon is that composition and the poses. In the original piece, they feel very on top of each other and there's a lot of pink hair flowing every”

“Super great work! I did a quick paintover! The first thing I wanted to tackle was indeed that lighting, now I assumed from the original piece that light is coming from straight above. So with that in”

“I did a quick paintover! I upped the saturation a little bit to make those colors pop! After that it was a matter of looking at the values and where the light is coming. Then, with a multiply layer, ”

“The colors are in fact pretty good! Good job! Now, I've only painted over the first 2 two, to showcase that there's a lot more going on than just the 2 color values. I've also shaded a ball as a guid”

“Love the work so far! Not as much feedback as an idea for a different lighting scenario that I feel creates a more ambiguous, bringing in some "mystery" about what's going on, but also brings more fo”

“I like the colors! Good work! All texture is mostly decided by the kind of light it's affected by, which requires proper form and shape. What's happened in your piece, is that you've gone really bri”

“First off, very good work! I think there's some three-dimensionality that's getting lost in his arms crossing, making it look at little more like it's cold outside. I did a fast paint-over and look”

“Good work over all! The main problem I see, is a lack of a definitive light source, which is crucial for figuring out how to illustrate forms in space, which leads to a lot of indecision. One of the”

“I am not super familiarized with drawing in an anime style. So I've brought it back to a more semi-realistic style, to easier explain my changes. I had some confusion with the angle of the head, beca”

“Well done on your initial construction! The planes of the face can be super difficult. I had some difficulty figuring out where your light source was, since almost all the hair was illuminated but a ”

“Super great work! Don't be afraid to go darker with your shadows! I just added a multiply layer on top of this, to showcase a lot of those forms that were already there in your drawing! Great work”

“Super great work already. First of all, I would just crop the image, for the sake of composition. There isn't really a lot going on, on that other side of the tree, so bringing the focus onto just the”

“Super difficult subject matter you've chosen to draw, really great job at even attempting something this difficult. I tried to add some power and energy! Kaido being a big unstoppable force and Luffy”

“You did super well on this chicken! The first thing I notice really holding it back is that black outline that surrounds it, it really knocks down that three-dimensionality making the image appear m”

“Good work on the structure and shape, I just tweaked it ever so slightly. I would say don't be afraid of darker shadows, the only other thing I've done to this illustration, is adding a multiply lay”

“Super great foundation, good pose and shape language. Most of the work I actually did was adding in a light layer layer and a shadow layer and just giving a little bit of shading to the shapes, mostl”

“I wanted to see if I could help by just simplifying and warping shapes around in an attempt to bring some more gesture into the image, removing at least some of the "stiffness" that can often happen i”

“First of all fruits like this can be super difficult. Your initial shapes are really great, the form of the fruit and shadows etc. I would first of all be mindful of the hard and soft edges, most of”