@varmun

“Hello again! So, the main advice I want to give you for this one is "push it." Go further with what you've got and exaggerate. Here's what I mean: Based on your original image, it seemed that yo”

“Hey there! So, I'm still new to composing scenes and doing convincing depth, but hopefully some of this is helpful. Main things I did for the scene at large was I lightened up the door and the c”

“Hi! I did a quick little value manipulation to try and help out. I'm still learning values, but I think this achieves your goal. Making the smoke far, far darker and adding brighter values to the b”

“Hello! I'll be focusing my feedback on anatomy, though there is a bit of perspective involved, too. The main thing I noticed was that for both of the characters, their hair did not follow the orien”

“Ahoy! Here's a quick paintover I did to try and add some more volume to the image. The main thing I noticed is that you didn't have many hard edges on your shadows. It was all soft edges, which are”

“Hi! I'm also still getting a handle on values, but I wanted to take a shot at helping you out. Take all that I say with a grain of salt. The main way that I try to address my values is to create a ”

“Hi, it's me again. I think a lot of your colors are honestly pretty good, but I did make some tweaks to the base colors. I increased the saturation by a little bit to give her skin some more life, ”

“Hi! I'm here to attempt useful critique. Wish me luck! So, overall, you've got a solid loomis head here. Given the anime proportions of the eyes, the divisions of the face are looking good. In a mo”

“Hello! First off, fantastic character! I love the way your stylized the fire, and the expression is fantastic. I'm still trying to improve at my own lighting, so if you don't like what I did, no wo”

“Hi! My first time giving feedback, so I hope this is at all useful and encouraging. First off, very cute character! And great job with this sort of perspective. It's really tough with the foreshort”