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“Hi there! Honestly this was already so cute, I think you could leave it as is, but I added in a few small details to make it a bit more cuter still! I think highlighting that she has rounder cheeks wo”
“Hello! You've hit the nail on the head, I think a big part of creating individualism in anime figures revolves around variation shape language. The eyes is always the first thing people look at, so I ”
“Hi there! You're right, it can get very heavy very quickly this way. With eyelashes and hair in general, it's best to think in shapes rather than lines in anime. So cluster together a thicker upper la”
“Hi there! I am amazed to see your progress with these, absolutely stunning work! I will have to nitpick very heavily. Let's start with the silhouette, you do a great job leaving these negative spaces ”
“Hi there! This is such an epic setup! I think the characters could be slightly more defined in terms of value with the background and layers. One other thing to consider is that in your scenen, every ”
“Hi there! Sometimes the lines between what is what kind of blur with these sort of things, but you are absolutely right that that part of the inside would also be considered form shadow! Great job! c:”
“Hello!! You've made my job pretty easy cause you pinpointed exactly what I wanted to discuss! I think the head was turning a bit too far to still feel natural, I also think the original left shoulder ”
“Hi there!! I think this is a pretty great portrait already, but I see what you mean... I think the eye and the eyebrow don't look like they're fitting together just yet (as the brow sits on the brow r”
“Hi there! Theys guys look like they're about to drop the album of the year, I love it :D I think the anatomy and gesture of the guy can be a bit smoother, right now the connection between the head/nec”
“Hi there! Cool character! When it comes to lighting in this piece, my advice would be to determine where that lighting is coming from first, and then applying it consistently. What I mean is that on t”
“Hi there! You did a fantastic job, to prove it I used your base to draw this into a shelf for our flower pot! Sometimes your own solutions will differ from what is being shown afterwards because there”
“Hi there! Colour use is a huge topic, so I totally get that you are struggling with it. Honestly it all comes down to understanding light. Identify where the shadows/lights are depending on the lights”
“Hi there! Sometimes I see artwork pass by on this platform and I think, what could I possibly add to it, this feels done. My two cents would be that the necklace feels a little bit noisy compared to t”
“Hi there! Short answer: absolutely you did! At artwod we also enforce the saying of "making it exist first, make it pretty later" and I think now that you are able to construct something like this, le”
“Hey! I struggled to find flaws in this piece, honestly. I understand what you mean with the lack of contrast at the top but at the same time I think it makes the piece look really atmospheric! Tried t”
“Hi there! I actually think you did a pretty good job nailing the perspective, my advice would be to pratice your elipses so you make sure there aren't any sharp corners at the edges. It helps a lot in”
“Hi there! Cool environment! I think the best way to push this further is to take another look at the cast and form shadows created by the 3D forms. You’re already doing this nicely on the cylinder of ”
“Hello! I completely agree with aherve's feedback. I think depending on how far you want to push lighting, making a quick shadow map first is going to help you get started! I did a very quick paintover”
“Hi, love your drawing technique! The lines are super clean and there's a good hierarchy in your line weight! My only feedback would also be to try and practise fitting it inside of the box, as it give”
“Hello! I'm a huge fan of WHA too so the moment I saw this piece I knew I had to make sure to get you some feedback! Antonio and I both took at look at it and we both agree that this background is gorg”
“Hi there! I made the arm a bit shorter because the hand felt quite far away and I added some folds. I think you were actually doing a pretty good job with those, just make sure to add some of those sm”
“Hi there, sorry for the delay! This is such a fun lineup! Are these thumbnails for a character prop? If so my first piece of advice would be to really determine the style first and then iterate on it,”
“Hiya, sorry for the delay! If you struggle with doing facial symmetry in a 3/4 angle and the perspective, it really helps to draw a face structure underneath (pink lines) I also tried to give the hair”
“Hi there, sorry about the delay! I think the pose looks sick, but maybe the proportions of the body feel a little bit off? (If the head is small and the legs really big because of a stylistic style th”