@rjhart

“While I am not happy with this result either, it was interesting to revisit and remake old ideas. Since i couldn’t decide on a single sketch I instead used two different sketches and drew mega and nor”

“Im Not sure if I know how to help, but here are some suggestions : -if you want make the capybara radiate warmth more clearly, you could use more warmer colors (a hard light layer might help to apply”

“If you continue on drawing the edges of the box, you might notice that the don‘t join all together in one point, but rather intersect in multiple different points (red). Instead try drawing the focal”

“I’ll first go through a few assumptions about the shape, since glass objects don’t really have shadows that tell their shape well: So, first off all I assumed that the bottom is only slightly wider ”

“I’ll first go through a few assumptions about the shape, since glass objects don’t really have shadows that tell their shape well: So, first off all I assumed that the bottom is only slightly wider t”

“I think it’s pretty good. I’m not amazing at drawing, yet, but from my impression, the leg looked a bit too big , even though it pointed towards the viewer. I think the one hand position looks kind of”

“I’m not sure how easy it it to do this traditionally, but maybe by setting a specific direction for light, might help. Increasing the contrast would make it look less homogen and would better show the”

“Hey, maybe something like this. I love the lighting in the background. I would also tread lightly with dark colors and certain other vibrant colors, because I think your drawing works amazingly well”

“Honestly. Amazing drawing. I am critiquing this because I have become blind to my own mistakes and need to bring myself to focus on problemsolving. I am not any better and my changes don’t necessaril”

“Honestly. Amazing drawing. I am critiquing this because I have become blind to my own mistakes and need to bring myself to focus on problemsolving. I am not any better and my changes don’t necessaril”