@orangebee

“Hi, this is a good study actually and your suspicions (value, edges, and color) actually aren’t the reason, you did great on all of them. I kept the edges painterly like in your original, I kept the ”

“Hi, I think if your concerns are flat rendering then you’d benefit from learning more about light logic, planes, and edges. In the paint-over, all I did was establish a light source and refine the ”

“Oi, Peço desculpas se houver algum erro gramatical; estou usando um aplicativo de tradução. Sua anatomia está boa; o problema, na verdade, é que o posicionamento da cabeça e do corpo não está totalmen”

“Hi, I think for rendering you could benefit simply from adding more details. Your portrait already has a great foundation and it shows that you already have a strong understanding of values and form, ”

“Hi, in my paint-over to make the flash photo i mainly established a clear light source and made a few anatomical changes. I can tell in the original picture you already have a good understanding o”

“I repainted the form and the proportions of your oc. Your attention to detail and linework is great, it shows that you have great knowledge on smaller value changes. However the structure of your pain”

“Your artstyle is already super charming, while I don’t know exactly what your goal art style is, in my paint-over I kept the elements that I found are done well like your anatomy, line quality, and fa”

“Because you have a more semi realistic style you had a good foundation for the structure actually, I think the issue with your “off” feeling comes from a lack of form clarity. In this specific piece, ”