@erintheforemastjill94

“Ok, you have a great concept here, but it is a little busy in certain areas. With the top page, it is good, but you don't need two spheres of magic, just when she's facing the viewer. On the second pa”

“Hi! So you got a good concept here, and I do see what you mean with the arm placement. The front arm is too small and close to the chest, so by making the arm longer and protruding the elbow, you get ”

“You really did! Nicely done with all three poses!”

“This is very nice! I like the concept, and the character is cute. One suggestion I would make is with the character's hair. If it's supposed to be fire- or water-like in appearance, perhaps make it mo”

“Dude, I remember getting films from this place as a kid, and my dad worked there as a teenager! Great choice for today, and the linework is so good!”

“You can color it in, just do it in a way that the character is stepping out of shadows and into a ray of light, with all the primary details focused on that beam of light.”

“The structure of the piece is sound, but I do think the purple lighting may not be a good choice. I suggest hues of Deep Sea Blue or Moonlight Blue with Silver to make the character and the Jellyfish ”

“I would say improvements to the hairline and eyebrows, as well as completing the shape of the ear.”

“I say you nailed Him well, and same with the saint. If you need more inspiration on Jesus' proportions, old paintings from Masters of art like Da Vinci (uploaded for reference) or even Michelangelo ar”

“Ok, you have a strong beginning. I see what you mean with the skirt ends and how it needs to conform to her curves. One thing I would like to suggest with form-hugging dresses is that, around certain ”

“Love this! The only feedback is hoping to see this colored in, as the pose, the linework, and the scene are perfect!”

“Overall, it is a good start and you nailed the perspective and the folds of the sails. Where I would change it is the waves, as they are too choppy for a simple sailing through "calm" seas, so I gave ”

“The pose is really good, and you captured the flow of a dragon's body. The only feedback I would give is on the wings. Dragon wings tend to fold like bat wings, unlike birds' or flying squirrels', and”