@hannah87400

“Your drawing looks really great. Lot of great drawing, great drapery, great design. I love your subtle line weight variation. Here’s some of my thoughts. Take them with a grain of salt, cause you ma”

“I’d add some more color variation to the face. Think about the color zones of the face. It usually adds more life to a portrait. Also just try experimenting with varying hues a bit in other ways. I ma”

“Not sure if my image worked the first time, so trying again”

“It’s looking really pretty. I like the colors you picked. It’s okay to use all the glitter, effects, and so on, but you want to use them in a controlled way. In an artwork you usually want some areas”

“It’s looking good, it’s a fun concept. I would make the bottom of the boulder a bit darker so there’s more of a value separation between it and the man. You generally want different items to have a bi”

“You could use lightening the lights and the background. Especially don’t be scared of getting some of the highlights on the face a lot brighter. As it is now, the artwork looks like someone turned dow”

“One minor issue is the hair on the left side feels a bit too wide/far from the head. Like the head doesn’t quite make sense under the hair. You’ve done a great job with the lighting, colors, and ove”

“Two immediate fixes you could have. The light from outside wouldn’t be hitting the blue wall directly at all. I’d put that whole wall in shadow. Another issue is the window feels really really deep. I”

“I would draw on top of your drawing where the head and face are under the hair and hat. I think there are some issues with the proportions and perspective of the face. Drawing the whole head under eve”

“I’d either make your middle value a bit brighter, include more of the apple in the lightest value, or add a fourth value. As it is, the apple doesn’t feel three dimensional because it doesn’t have eno”

“The ear closest to us lacks clarity. Where is the back of the head vs the ear? Where is the opening of the ear exactly? Also, turn your artwork into greyscale and you’ll find that most of your values ”