@paw4d00w

“I think the face perspective is the main issue, cuz the features dont really match the angle of the head and it makes it look a bit flat. The far eye also looks a bit too big for the angle. The jaw ”

“I feel like the anatomy isnt so bad, u just made her less flexible than any other person xd. The right br.ast would be raised when the arm is lifted by anatomy realism. And to make it less boring i wo”

“I think u just got a clean way of sketching! Its not bad and theres no such a thing as being bad at sketching. Everyone got their own way and u shouldnt be bothered by "overdoing" somethng - thats ur ”

“I think the problem is that the whole head is thin. Ur proportins are right, but u made the head abit too long and slim, which led u to drawing right proportions on wrong head T-T”

“Perhaps this could work? (The paintover)”

“More contrast and different light on ballons and the face!”

“U could try making lines more "free looking". Don't try to under do them or overdo them, making ur lines go the way they feel. Take references of the folds from other people pictures or u could make o”

“Maybe something like that? (The paintover)”

“Something like this?”

“First of all, the artwork is super adorable! I love the character design and the expression I'd change the pose, she doesnt seem so shocked/excited by the light. To show more character and emotions, ”

“Just some depth into the cubes of the heel and its perfect!”

“I'd suggest making the light and shadow more contrasted and darker/lighter!”

“The whole work looks pretty cool, i like the idea and the pose! My honest opinion is that the body seems too short in that art, even for such perspective, half of it is missing T-T. Perhaps some fix”

“Its not a bad thing! iF u can tell the details and art seems sharp when it's far away - you're doing good! I don't see any problems in the artwork u posted. Its blurry in the movement, which is the ri”

“Don't blur ur light too much, it makes it messy and soapy lookin”

“Sorryy if my feedback is abit messy. I'd add some wind to the hair, perhaps more colour pattern variants on the clothes and piece of lave belt on the hips. Something under the shirt, to make it have m”

“First thing to notice - arm is missing the wrist and is anatomically incorrect. Muscles on the shoulders and arm seem too pressed into the body, like theyre just puffing out. Wholesome body is fine. I”

“If u want smth more detailed, this could help!”

“Use references!”

“Tried to explain it in one piece”

“More depth into shadow and different composition”

“Make neck shorter and head a little bigger”

“Dont use gray shadows for ur artwork. Suggest using more purple and pinkish tones. Perhaps orange between light and shadow for vibrant depth”

“Suggesting to make eyes bigger and more far away from each other. If youre drawing in procreate, try blending shadows abit to add depth :D”