Im no professional artist so take this with a grain of salt!
I fixed the hair a bit since it was slightly uneven and the form was quite awkward. I muted down the light strands so they wouldn't stand out as much.
For the rendering I added a dark rim around the crown of the hair. Then lightly brushed some darker grays beneath. I added shadows to distinguish the different sections of the hair. Also added shadows around the edges to show more depth and distinguish between the back hair and front hair. I also added a dark black outline
I added a bit of blush because chibis usually have that more cutey look. And since chibis have minimal face rendering it adds a nice touch and makes it match the hair more.
Changed the pupils a little bit since they looked a little wonky.
thank you so much! it really does help seeing it from someone else’s perspective, it looks amazing and a lot more than what I can currently do. If it’s not much of an issue, could I ask how exactly you blended out his hair? I’d love to get your feedback on the finished piece as well if totally possible! (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)
i also really love the blush and eye detail, i originally added a tiny bit but it wasn’t very noticeable.
Réponse à @vial19987
by asking how you blended his hair I specifically meant to ask what brushes and or program you used, along with the color palette just to go into a little depth of what I’m asking so it’s not super confusing. probably should’ve specified in the first comment, my apologies! (╥ ᴗ ╥)