Hello, I like the hair you got going with this. It’s got a good silhouette and I like the big medium small shapes that are clear and simple for a character you will might have to draw many times for a story. I just have a few suggestions about things you could consider for improving how you design hair. Hair can be challenging to design and look natural. I’ve included some sketches with tips to try out. 1. Look for opportunities with negative space (outlined in greed). It’s surprising how much this can enhance the realism of hair. Most people always have some stray hairs flying around that create those little holes in the silhouette. Look for them to create some interesting negative space. 2. Frayed edges. You have the right idea with the little spikes in the hair that poke out of the silhouette. But having them all the same size can be alittle un interesing. Try adding a few smaller hairs that fray out of the spikes for some extra texture. Let their edges be alittle undefined and soft. 3. Overlap: To add volume you don’t really need to render as much as show the overlaps in the forms. It can be helpful to think of the tufts of hair as ribbons. They twist and turn, and even loop back onthemselves. Practice drawing those ribbon shapes in different size. Thin and super thick ribbons. Just draw an origin point, and try to make the ribbons stream out of it in different directions. Fun stuff! Thanks for sharing.