Hi so I tried to improve the piece - First is that the eyes are too separated so I'll js move it closer, her eyes are also tilted bc she's a arrogant character, and don't forget her eyebrows! - Second is that the hand is too small compare to the arm so I js make it a bigger - Third, the hair is too spiky but in reality, hair moves in clumps and volume - Fourth, when drawing anime character, you should simplify the nose to a line or a dot. - Finally, I changed the right shoulder proportion bc it's looks "bloated"