@jeremyr

“Extend your perspective lines.”

“Hi, This is a lovely illustration, I really like it. It’s very stylised so I don’t want to comment on anatomy. The reason it looks ‘flat’ is just due to a lack of contrast between your base tones a”

“Pretty good effort there. Just need to be careful with some of your ellipses. The ones you drew on top of the table are too elongated which then distorted the perspective for the rear table legs.”

“Super cool drawing. To push the illusion of form try to think of the arm as two separate cylinders. Leo’s right arm feels a little flat. From this angle his upper arm should be coming more towards ”

“Texture is more about value and light/shadow than detail. You’re creating the illusion of detail rather than drawing the detail itself. Think about the material you’re trying to draw and how light ”

“Love the idea and your execution is pretty good too. Two things I would point out. The first is to ask “did you draw the other ear?” Your tire is a little off center. If you draw through the form that”

“Hi, that’s a pretty good attempt. I knew straight away who it was so good job there. To avoid smudging your page just take a scrap piece of paper and use that to rest your hand on. As for how t”

“Hi there, I’d like to give you a few tips for shading with cross hatching/linework. The first thing is you need to understand volume and form so that you can understand how the light affects the ob”

“A car is just a box in perspective. Go to the ArtWOD beginner road and work through that. That will teach you the fundamentals of form and perspective which will give you the tools to draw anything yo”

“This is a really cool and creative illustration. If you feel that you're struggling with form then I would recommend just spending some time going over the basics of form and perspective. Boxes, cy”

“Hi there. So first of all, I think you’ve actually got a pretty good drawing here, you just need a little more structure. To avoid writing a novel, I’ll just say I think you should focus mostly on ”

“It doesn’t look like trash to me. You’ve got the right idea about following the contours of the form and the shading you had already done made sense. Understanding shading is really just about unde”

“That’s a difficult question to answer properly without knowing where your light source is and what the image as a whole looks like. Essentially a corset is a cylinder. So to understand how to shade”

“Hi, pretty good effort and your character is easily recognizable so well done there. Rather than asking if it looks good, you should instead ask yourself “does this look how I imagined?” I think y”

“Hi, that’s a great illustration. Really cool idea. I wouldn’t worry too much about the rendering. Instead I would focus more on the form and pose. The way your character is standing feels a little”

“Hi, so firstly I think the drawing is great and I don’t think you have any real issues with the anatomy. There are a few things I could nitpick but I don’t think that’s necessary. One small nitpick”

“To draw the head at different angles you need to understand the basic form of the head. The Loomis method is a great starting point because it teaches the head as simple shapes. It looks like you’re”

“Very nice illustration. A couple of things I would point out. The first is to follow the contours of the form. The lines don’t just indicate shadow but also the shape of an object. So the area around ”

“I think the issue is there’s a disconnect between her upper torso and her pelvis. This is exacerbated by the line of her shoulders being the same as her pelvis. You just need to spend a little more ti”

“This is maybe not what you want to hear but it’s what you need to understand. You need to focus first on understanding form. Basic 3D shapes and breaking the human form into a simple mannequin will he”

“They’re not too far off to be honest. There’s a few differences around the epicanthic folds and the bottom of the right eye is sitting slightly above your guideline. A few more guidelines will help in”

“The hair and pony tail look decent, it’s the neck and face profile that were off. The neck should be more angled (it tilts forward in order to support the head) and the proportions of the face need m”

“Try to focus more on the underlying structure and form. Drawing with simple shapes will allow you to more easily adjust the proportions of your characters as well as allowing you to create more dynami”

“Being able to draw from imagination and rotate objects really just comes down to how well you understand form and perspective. What you want to do is break the object down into simpler shapes that you”