@michaelm

“So I actually disagree that it is not visually interesting, But there are some things you could do, these arent mandatory just some brainstorm thoughts I had that you could maybe experiment with a lit”

“So when it comes to rendering specially when you are starting out I recommend finding a similar reference of quality to compare too. Because you have a dragon I pulled up a reference that firs my pers”

“So first things first dude, this is friggin awesome! I saw this and I had to give feedback and just let you know that DANG what a piece. (please tag me in the discord with where to find your work im ”

“Nice Practice, but you gotta get that 3D form in there. I would suggest practiceing your spheres, cylinders and cubes for a few minutes before tackling this, do some simple forms, then manipulate the ”

“Hey Great work! Personally I dont see an issue color wise so I kind of skipped that part. I think the biggest issue is your lighting. My advice is to make it as simplistic as possible. What I did”

“Ok so a few things. First don't chicken scratch, it could just be the texture of the paper but it looks very scratchy so draw from the shoulder. Secondly, Slow Down! I've seen your other form stud”

“First things first I think you did fine with the hair accessory on your drawing but basically for accessories like that just think of them as planes attached to the head! For Hats just think of fo”

“I think the composition is working quite well! if I had to give a suggestion It would be to have the fish enter in from above or going into the roatation with the other fish that way you dont lose the”