The core underlying bone structure is lacking also the figure seems very stiff. work on your gestures and structure before adding anatomy without a good base the figure is boring. Think of it this way a good figure is like a cake. A cake with a good base is always the best cake the frostings are just small additives that slightly alter the taste. Same with figure. The best figures are the ones with great gesture and underlying structure get these down and you'll do great. Cheers | Artwod Feedback