Really great work! I did a quick structural paintover! The arms felt a bit unproportionally long and were both fighting for attention in the composition, so I moved the other arm back, making the silhouette and foreshortening read clearer. Then also making sure the sword is our biggest compositional element, really guiding our eye all the way through the piece. Then especially to make that glowing eye stand out even more, I covered the other eye up, composition is all about the story being told and the emotion you want to convey, so I really felt it ads a bit more dramatic energy to the piece, also falling more in line with the fact that we can't see Kris' eyes normally, same thing with making that finger be pointing, a hand pose we often see Kris do. Hope this help! Great work keep going!
Thank you so much! I tried to do slight perspective from the top though I think halfway through I sort of gave up which resulted in the strange proportions. The paintover really helped me see the things needing to be fixed, thank you again. I will revise the piece with your when I get the chance and post it.
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Awesome! Glad I could help if just a little! Can't wait to see what you come up with!

