@olliepopart

“Hey there, thanks for sharing your art! I love the expressions you pulled off here! Something I noticed when taking your image into grey scale is that a lot of your "bright" local values are very ”

“Hey there! I love the narrative that you are telling in this piece! Awesome work! That being the case, if you had a way to emphasize the person in the water above even more (maybe a little larger) ”

“Something to take into consideration is how far away Troy is in the background. Being further back in space, you might want to look at de saturating/ bringing down the contrast in your values fro”

“This is a super cool design you have going on here (especially the back scroll - love it!) I think something that could give this design even more of a "pop" would be some wear and tear in the clo”

“There is so much charm in this piece! Awesome job! Depending on your priorities moving forward - especially if callouts are a goal, one option might be to strengthen them as an element of composit”

“This is an awesome piece! Fantastic work! I think something that may help direct even more to some of your focal points is pushing your contrast a touch further as well as some highlights within the p”

“There is awesome composition here for setting up the depth of your values! Keeping in mind how your values change in saturation as you move back in space (Front/Mid/Back) can help as you try to draw ”