@erunamo

“I think it isn't clear what direction the light is coming from. It seems to be coming from above, but there aren't many strong shadows and there seem to be shadows where there shouldn't be. See where ”

“These are clearly quick gestures, so I'm not going to critique accuracy. Proportions and flow and even some anatomy all look pretty good for a fast gesture, well done! I think there's an opportunit”

“Nice work! I think the shadows are mostly correct, but the inside of the coat should be in shadow, like the pants are. There’s no light source from below that would lighten it. I also think there ”

“Your body forms actually look pretty solid to me. The legs seem a little less confident but I can still see how they are positioned in space. You can certainly do more insect studies if you’d like,”