@mike

“The main problem I have noticed is a bit of a problem with composition. In your drawing it is a bit hard to notice, at a glance, that it is supposed to be a port city. As such I have rotated things a ”

“Hey, because writing on the canvas is ass, I'll write here to the points that I highlighted 1) The main reason why your characters don't pop up is, in my opinion, that their colors are too similar t”

“Hey, I'd like to start by saying that this is pretty solid. What I would change is two things - remove the sign, as in this composition it gives it a lot of significance as a third focal point of the ”