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“I like the mannequinization of this piece. When you want to do more flowing anatomy make sure you are drawing through shapes rather than stopping shapes abruptly. Drawing through keeps it feel more na”

“I enjoy the composition and storytelling of this image. If I were to add feedback, it would be to add lighting”

“make sure your lighting is consistent to where the light source is and same for the shadows they, should be facing away from the lightsource. Also keep in mind Big Medium Small, not every part of the ”

“Love your design and subject matter. I think in order to make the pose more dynamic you might wanna put the character in a more dynamic perspective or angle. here I made the camera angle higher”

“Nice perspective! for the lighting you have to decide a lightsource direction before starting to add shadows. In this one I put it behind the character, Grouping shadow shapes is helpful, I also decid”

“love the composition,i like the elements in this image. To fix the muddiness i would recommend to tone down the use of a soft edge brush and use more hard edges.”

“I like the pose that you gave the drawing, since it has contrapposto and asymmetry. Having a solid mannequin would help with adding muscles later on, Also make sure to draw through your shapes during ”

“I like how the flowers looked and added to the scenes. For the shadows i think studying how a box is shaded against a light source would be a great way of learning how to shade. Overlaps re also real”

“The design is cool, I love the overlaps on the arm. Overlap is important in showing the depth of a subject. it is done well on that arm, but the chest looks flat, it needs more overlaps. In terms of p”

“I think it's mostly the chin, it's a bit too short.”

“Design your shadow shapes more deliberately, don't be afraid to go darker with your shadows. With the top right image the upper arm looks too short. If it's supposed to be foreshortened and going towa”

“Did this on my phone so lines look wobbly, but the crits i would give and the things I changed were the ears, making the one farther from the camera slightly shorter than the one in front. Making the ”