@aherve

“Great Portrait ! I think the nose don't advance enough and make the face look flat. I hope it helps!”

“Amazing knight! I am not sure about why but the sword is bothering me. I tried something with the paintover to show more thumb, to make the grip higher and to add move width to the guard. I hope yo”

“Really cool drawing! the main issue I spotted is the connection between the arm and the head. In red you can see an highlight from the snake prolonging the head cut, this read not clearly. I wou”

“Hello! Cool Rabbits! I would advise not to draw lines to define the contour of your shadows they will blend more with the environment this way. I Hope it helps”

“I love the design of this lighthouse! The only critics I would do is about the curvature of the contours lines under the platform, they should follow a more round elipse as they go away from the hor”

“Hello I don't think it is as bad as you think. What seems weird for me is that I feel the torso is both twisted and not twisted at the same time. I think you need to make clearer pose for that. T”

“What a sick design ! I would do a really simple shading, just define a shadow map with every form and cast shadows (don't go into details, just general shapes). Then pick a darker color (with a bit”

“The simple way to draw shadow is to pick a light source (here top right) and then color everything that is not facing light in a dark opposite cold color (here blue) then add a bit of transparency unt”

“I love Kvothe ! I am not an anatomy expert but your legs seems fine to me. For the lighting I think you didn't darken enough. Also a good rule is to shade with another color, preferably a cold one ”

“Amazing work ! I wonder if a darker background would make it pop more. I feel the current background value is too similar with your light area and therefore the silhouette is less readable. What”

“The Shepard is spectacular! And Cortana is good too (maybe you could have drawn her see-thtought since it's a hologram) My main issue is with the military man. The pose is strange you cannot have t”

“Like always, really cool artwork! Since the lightsaber is probably the biggest light source and a strong one, I would consider your lightest light remains white and I would only color the darkest l”

“It difficult here because you have multiple light source. For spots like this, imagine a cone of light (in perspective) falling from its source. If something block the cone, remove this part (with si”

“Hello ! What a cool drawing. One thing that stand out for me are the values, everything is bright. I think you could improve the composition by adding more form and cast shadows. And make the back”

“Hello. What a cool painting ! One tips I learned recently is to use cold color for shadows if the light is warm (and vice versa) I tried something with purple here. What do you think ?”

“Hello, what a cool painting ! One tips I learned recently is to use cold color for shadows when the light is warm (and vice versa). What do you think ?”

“Hello ! What an amazing design ! I am not an anatomy expert at all. What I think is weird is the pose, not the body. In a fast moving vehicule manipulating tools should be easy and fast. So breaking”

“Really cool drawing ! I especially love the water effect. I think the perspective Is of though. The figure seems next to the horizon line but the fountain seems far from it. You might have to a”

“Hello, Really cool scene ! The legs looks weird thought. I think they look like mini-legs drawn with a normal perspective. You tried 3 pts perspective so the vertical axe of the bodies shoul”

“Hello again ! The figure seems great ! I just find that the perspective of the staff is bad. It seems curved and twisted at both ends. Probably because you liked the crescent and wanted to show it ”

“Hello, what a great artwork ! I find nothing to say on the line art or hatching. But I have an issue with the shadows : You have really strong pitch dark cast shadow from the trees and rock but t”

“Hello ! I am far from an expert but here are some pointers I found : 1. your perspective tend to curve the more you go left. I don't think it's intentional. 2. For the depth of window you can use”

“I like your landscape ! Regarding the shadow of cloud I would suggest shading with a complementary color instead of black (here a red-purplish tone). Also keep the shadow shape simple to avoid bei”

“Great work ! For the cylinder, the more you go away from the horizon the more you should see the ellipse. Here you have 1 circle too wide that is clearly a mistake. You could also widen a bit the ”